After practicing and giving and receiving feedback all week, students were challenged to craft one perfect “detailed” sentence. Click on “Replies” to see their work.
The Daily Platypus
Everything You Need to Know About Mr. Lewis' Current Class of Wonderful Rotters at Central Point Elementary
Today my mom and I went to pizza planet to eat pizza but we got cupcakes instead.
-raylee r.
Last night I called the animal catchers because I saw a group of animals running around Pizza Planet.
Yesterday I packed my suitcases because I was visiting my grandma at her farm with sheep , cows, horses and ducks .
Last week at the Columbus airport, T.S.A stopped me because of the shampoo in my suitcases.——Elaina Johnson
My friend Ava.K and I were going to a Pizza Planet to pet farm animals.
Yesterday I went to a farm to eat pizza with the pigs in the mud.
I was on a pizza planet and then a suit case hit me on the head because I was an intruder.
I was out in space on a pizza planet with a suitcase full of gaterade bottles and farm animals on the planet.
Today I went to a one star Pizza Planet with my friend Ava,and when we got there a weird smelling girl gave us our pizza in a black suitcase.
Monday I went to Pizza Plant to get pizza and they gave me holographic meatloaf, so I returned it!
My mom and I went to Walmart for a suitcase for my Megain Trainer concert! –Kaylegh
I was packing my suitcase for a trip to the pizza planet yesterday because I was bored.
Today my friend , Jon, and I went to Pizza Planet but when we got there, there were farm animals because the zoo was behind it.