Students are working on crafting Super Sentences containing dialogue. To pass, they need to have all the usual conventions (periods, capitals, correct spelling), as well as properly located quotation marks. Click on “replies” to see the sentences created by the students.
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Cole you forgot a period
alexis good job but it is a little boring.
Ben yours is cool but you spelt football rong.
Brady you could start with ”If was a pig and I could fly I will hit Suzy,”said Cole
about Jamie’s sentence; it sound be run and I instead of run I.
Ben you need to say who’s saying it .
Maya yours is really good and there is no mistakes.
Skylar that was funny
Kelsey that was good
Comments on Ben: You spelled football wrong. Oops!
ben reed you spelled fell wrong.
jimmy:p.s a little violent
why dose it say josiah on the comments
comment on Jed
makes no since
Josh it should say (I broke my leg in football) not (broke my leg in football but its cool.
Comments on Jimmy
1.)Jimmy when it says i have lots of computers dont touch them, there should be a comma after computers.
2.) When you say i will crack your heads it should probably say crack your heads open.
3.) NO PERIOD!! OH NO
Suzanne Foster: Suzy, yours is completely correct, but really a bear trying to eat me? That is just mean. But great job!
Ben you didn’t say who it was said by
Johnny you know I don’t hang out with you know who anymore
Jonathan your sentence doesn’t make scene
Great job everybody!
jed no quotation marks
Gage your sentence is funny and good.You don’t need to make the s on said a capital.
Abby you need a end mark on the end of your sentence but beside it’s really good.
Kim:yours is funny to me
Gage it does not make sens.
I like yours Kelsey
Good job Rubie
Abby Stec nice sentence
comment on Ethan
no end mark!
you mean Jacob jimmy
alexis good job but it was a Little boring.
comments on two people KIm,Skylar\
I LOVE YOURS KIM no mistakes
I LOVE YOURS SKYLAR theres lots of details
nice job abby stec
Kimberley you did a good job but you don’t need a space before the comma.
Derek you forgot they end marke
Comments on Skylar your sentence is great except it should probably say said Kelsey not Kelsey said.
brady your I needs to be a capital.
Jed you put the word three not the number.
Brady you need to put your tong in.