Click on the “replies” link below to see last week’s Super Sentences. After three days of practice and feedback, each student was expected to write one perfect past-tense sentence to post here. The topic choices were unicorn bears, sardine sandwiches, and Legos. Students who had incorrect sentences were required to do a “sentence repair,” though you can still see a few errors, most resulting from the transition from paper to the Web.
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Everything You Need to Know About Mr. Lewis' Current Class of Wonderful Rotters at Central Point Elementary
Last summer, Paige and i went camping and saw a unicorn bear,and it was doing ballet.
Yesterday, I was headed to the lunchroom when I saw a unicorn bear with a sardine sandwich.
A couple days ago, I went to the circus and I saw a pink and purple unicorn bear making a sparkly sardine sandwich.
Two hundred years ago a unicorn bear was dancing to the Party Rock anthem and eating a sardine sandwich
Two days ago, my friend Jack was eating a sardine sandwich so I went to my brown house and had my own sandwich.
Once upon a rainy Saturday, I played with my multiple colored Yoshi Legos at the Central Point Park.
Two years ago, I got Amber a unicorn a bear. She loved it so much she would sleep with it everynight !
Two days ago, my little brother was playing with Legos and I found a unicorn bear
and it ate my little brother and the Legos
Yeaterday, My brother got me an Amber~colored unicornbear.
I was watch Unicorn bears playing with their favorite Legos while eating sardine sandwiches.
Two years ago when I went to the happiest place on earth ( wich is also known as Disney Land), my cousin ate a sardine sandwich, so she tried to avoid the vertiginous rides.
Last Saturday I was out the window the window of my house and I saw a unicorn bear walk in front of my window.
Yesterday I saw a unicorn bear that was eating legos, and he liked them.
Once upon a snowy Monday my Mom’s unicorn bears magically disappeared, and then I was late for school looking for my Mom’s unicorn bear collection.
Next year I want you to be our class teacher.
Yesterday I built a life -size Lego New York city.
One rainy Sunday, I went for a hike and saw two uni bears playing a very one- sided game of Lego dodge-ball while eating sardine sandwiches.
One snowy saturday i saw a unicorn bear with a laser and he was fighting a lego monster.
one time a unicorn bear that was making a unicorn pie because it beat up a unicorn
Yesterday , Zach and I had a Lego party in his colorful house.
i saw a sardine sandwich playing with legos
Last year, I was on the search for the legendary unicorn bear and I found it doing a disco dance.
Yesterday I ate my dad’s rotten sardine sandwich and I had to spit it out in the sink.
Once upon a time on a sunny day I saw unicorn bears and Dakoda but then the unicorn bears ate Dakoda.
Two days ago, I was playing with Legos and then I went outside and I found a unicorn bear,and it ate a sardine sandwich.